Self criticism:

April 30, 2020
TSL prompt:

Point of view of second person.

Those writers are terrific and you are terrible;
a terrible fish
floating
on an ocean
of
golden reflections.
You
doodle
On pages
and call it poetry, eh?
You are a clown,
a metaphor of mockery..😂

“Tomorrow never comes for you”;
You
are a “thief of time”
procrastinating
until the sky falls on you.
You
are a cuckoo,
a lazy cuckoo.
The sun shines
on you
through others’
nest and
you bask shamelessly..
You are a comedy of parody😀

You
are a
slave of your judgement;
Have you
ever
worn shoes
of others
like Goldielocks
of the three bears?
Not all skies
are azure;
Gaze at those
morbid skies
before you
drench
in rains
of emotions.
What differentiates
you
from the robot
except artificial intelligence?
You are a robot..
No, the robot is
better than
you!😀

Copyrights @Brindha Vinodh

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